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About Me Member Wannabe Novelist zwerg8Germany Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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  • Current Residence: http://slurl.com/secondlife/Temptations/190/190/24/
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and script again: as base of writing

Sun Nov 8, 2009, 7:27 PM
Here's my newest attempt: Beginning with what is "Part 1: Jona" in the story version here, I re-wrote it, began with a later age of the twins, and ... well.
It is not yet where I think it were great, but still there is "potential" in it.

When I imagine, the last time I tried transforming "Jona" into a script, it took more than 100 scenes to come to about the same point where I am now with less than 40 scenes.

I will however continue transforming my story into a script first, entirely, and then I'll write the novel based on this script. I already started writing and saw that it really helps me a lot to focus on characters, on visual description etc, to let the reader immerse deeper into my story.
Still I see myself as a mere beginner, but I keep working, researching, reading, writing. :)

  • Mood: Tired
  • Listening to: Faith and the Muse

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keine Ursache :)
sind ja auch jedes mal schöne Bilder.

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Thanks for faving my half-done-play thing :D

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Thanks for :+fav:ing my story :)

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I just HAD TO. It's really great.
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lol thanks :)

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Ooh! Thanks for watching me! :)

You also get the "first deviant to watch me after I became a subscriber" award, btw :)

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Welcome :)

Your reward: a feature in my next journal. ^^

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:iconzwerg8:
you're very welcome :-)
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Hey, this is a "generic" message to say that you can check my new current DA account: [link] .
(I send you this because you already saw my works, added them to fav, added me to friends etc.)
So please check my gallery because she's unknown at the moment! and add to fav some pics ;)

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