Here's my newest attempt: Beginning with what is "Part 1: Jona" in the story version here, I re-wrote it, began with a later age of the twins, and ... well.
It is not yet where I think it were great, but still there is "potential" in it.
When I imagine, the last time I tried transforming "Jona" into a script, it took more than 100 scenes to come to about the same point where I am now with less than 40 scenes.
I will however continue transforming my story into a script first, entirely, and then I'll write the novel based on this script. I already started writing and saw that it really helps me a lot to focus on characters, on visual description etc, to let the reader immerse deeper into my story.
Still I see myself as a mere beginner, but I keep working, researching, reading, writing.

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~Aegair If you're interested in something that should have never been born...
sind ja auch jedes mal schöne Bilder.
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I wish you well.
I'm Sinnerdom there too.
eyra
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If I were to put something here, would people actually read it?
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>Don't Give Up On The Dream<
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Visit Forge Valley Today!
Population: [link]
Industry: [link]
Transport: [link]
Security: [link]
eyra
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If I were to put something here, would people actually read it?
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You know I love you
eyra
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If I were to put something here, would people actually read it?
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You know I love you
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"There seems to be a problem between the modem and network..."
"Are you sure it's not a problem between the user and keyboard?"
You also get the "first deviant to watch me after I became a subscriber" award, btw
eyra
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If I were to put something here, would people actually read it?
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You know I love you
thank you!
Your reward: a feature in my next journal. ^^
eyra
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If I were to put something here, would people actually read it?
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You know I love you
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"I've been thinking with my guts since forever, and you know what? I've come the conclusion that my guts have shit for brains"
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-Jade[moon-eternity] -x3
[Those who rise with the sun are simply to weak to run with the stars.]
(I send you this because you already saw my works, added them to fav, added me to friends etc.)
So please check my gallery because she's unknown at the moment! and add to fav some pics
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